Another layout design question

[Raven_Writer]

Ok, I've been working on a more "spaceless" design...and here is my final work so far:

http://www15.brinkster.com/usfirst/layout.asp

Please tell me what you think.

[Duke 13370]

Not bad, but i think your colors could do with a bit of spiffing up. yellow on black isn't very easy on the eyes. http://www.chiefdelphi.com/forums/showthread.php?t=20866&highlight=color

I might also suggest defining the edges of the table a bit more, it looks like a bunch of text randomly placed around the screen otherwise.

Sorry, once a critic, always a critic.

[IMDWalrus]

I'd second the removing the yellow-on-black color combination. Would switching to black-on-yellow work better, perhaps?

Other than that, it looks fine.

[Raven_Writer]

I'd second the removing the yellow-on-black color combination. Would switching to black-on-yellow work better, perhaps?

Other than that, it looks fine.Black on yellow in my opnion is just like green-on-red (very, very, ugly & bad). Nice suggestion though ;)


Not bad, but i think your colors could do with a bit of spiffing up. yellow on black isn't very easy on the eyes. http://www.chiefdelphi.com/forums/s...highlight=color (http://www.chiefdelphi.com/forums/showthread.php?t=20866&highlight=color)

I might also suggest defining the edges of the table a bit more, it looks like a bunch of text randomly placed around the screen otherwise.

Sorry, once a critic, always a critic.
What do you mean by "it looks like a bunch of text randomly placed around the screen"?