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Gary Dillard
14-10-2005, 07:56
Robot related
random yet poetic thoughts
reply to this thread

Billfred
14-10-2005, 10:35
Poor, poor Gary Dillard
Unsung FIRST Hero knows not
I was shown those pics. :D

(the emoticon doesn't count as a syllable)

Elgin Clock
16-10-2005, 04:25
:D

(the emoticon doesn't count as a syllable)

True True, but a picture is worth a thousand words, and how many syllables do those thousand words have combined though?

I'm guessing.. a lot. :p

nehalita
16-10-2005, 08:40
Work I have not done
For my laziness is such
Eventually...

you know a cool spoof of this game is taking the last word of the previous haiku and starting the next haiku with that work. ex: the next person would start the haiku off with the world "eventually"

RogerR
16-10-2005, 08:42
True True, but a picture is worth a thousand words, and how many syllables do those thousand words have combined though?

I'm guessing.. a lot. :p

not in proper form
is elgin's above reply
it has no place here.

:D

Travis Hoffman
16-10-2005, 11:28
Kickoff, where art thou?
Rescue us from our boredom.
Death to Haiku now!

:)

mechanicalbrain
16-10-2005, 12:58
The season draws near.
But I have a new dremel.
Let the chaos start!

[not a haiku]Im so ready! [/not a haiku]

Ian Curtis
16-10-2005, 14:04
A long long time ago
In a place called Mach Vegas
FIRST was given Life

Gary Dillard
16-10-2005, 16:07
not in proper form
is elgin's above reply
it has no place here.

:D
Searching on Google
many unique forms (http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm#comego) are found
he chose another

Ian Curtis
16-10-2005, 16:28
original haiku
had no sylable limits
just flowed very well

KathieK
16-10-2005, 16:50
FIRST Senior Mentors...
Where would we be without them
giving us advice?

[in honor of all the ones who have advised me over the last year - you guys are THE BEST]

RogerR
16-10-2005, 20:02
Searching on Google
many unique forms (http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm#comego) are found
he chose another

i always thought that
reply was one syllable
boy am i ig'nant.

Eugenia Gabrielov
17-10-2005, 18:29
Robot - I love you
The time to party is near
6 weeks of parties!

Let it be known now
I have not grown much this year
But I will try more!

My team is awesome
We have entered BMR
That regional rocks.

nehalita
18-10-2005, 18:51
Rocks always give me
that urge to caste them away...
Ripples upon ripples.

(yes the last line has 6 syllables but a haiku flows and i think it flows fine)

CraigHickman
18-10-2005, 19:40
[not a haiku] Haiku's are fun! [/not a haiku]

A Haiku is fine
Mainly when used to a point
Such as *gasp* sharp sticks!