These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
 

Not sure where to put this, but I'm hoping for some input so I can fix it up.

Robotics adaptation of 'These are a few of my favorite Things. This is what happens when the transit strike deprives me of robotics...

Random Robotics parody of 'These Are A Few of my Favorite Things'

Lubedrops on toolbits and hard wooden benches
Noisy old band saws and seven sixteenth wrenches
Old award tapestries hanging from strings
These are a few of my favorite things

Robotics manuals with monochrome palates
Hammers and power drills and hard rubber mallets
Robot team presidents treated like kings
These are a few of my favorite things

Boys in clear goggles with large power tools
Extension cords that are wrapped around spools
Defensive backbots with PVC wings
These are a few of my favorite things

When the bolt breaks
When the oil's gone
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don't feel so bad


-winces- Yeah... I'm new, so I'm not sure exactly where this should've went, but this looked like the right thread. Looking for some help - especially on the 'pvc wings' and 'oil's gone' lines. The 'award tapestries' line also needs serious help, too.

Er... thanks in advance?

Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
 

Haha loved it. Would you consider reposting it in the FIRST poetry thread?

Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
 

There's a poetry thread? But this is parody, would it still go there, as the work isn't original entirely...

EDIT: And either way, this is a work in progress, so it's not quite finished and polished for a poetry thread. Is that thread offical, or just fandom?

Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
 

A poetry thread?
Whisper! Dont tell Ken Wittlief
Drat! He has found us

Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
 

He's a poet, but don't know it, but his feet show it, Longfellows :D