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These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
Not sure where to put this, but I'm hoping for some input so I can fix it up.
Robotics adaptation of 'These are a few of my favorite Things. This is what happens when the transit strike deprives me of robotics... Random Robotics parody of 'These Are A Few of my Favorite Things' Lubedrops on toolbits and hard wooden benches Noisy old band saws and seven sixteenth wrenches Old award tapestries hanging from strings These are a few of my favorite things Robotics manuals with monochrome palates Hammers and power drills and hard rubber mallets Robot team presidents treated like kings These are a few of my favorite things Boys in clear goggles with large power tools Extension cords that are wrapped around spools Defensive backbots with PVC wings These are a few of my favorite things When the bolt breaks When the oil's gone When I'm feeling sad I simply remember my favorite things And then I don't feel so bad -winces- Yeah... I'm new, so I'm not sure exactly where this should've went, but this looked like the right thread. Looking for some help - especially on the 'pvc wings' and 'oil's gone' lines. The 'award tapestries' line also needs serious help, too. Er... thanks in advance? |
Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
Haha loved it. Would you consider reposting it in the FIRST poetry thread?
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Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
There's a poetry thread? But this is parody, would it still go there, as the work isn't original entirely...
EDIT: And either way, this is a work in progress, so it's not quite finished and polished for a poetry thread. Is that thread offical, or just fandom? |
Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
A poetry thread?
Whisper! Dont tell Ken Wittlief Drat! He has found us |
Re: These Are A Few of my Favorite Things...
He's a poet, but don't know it, but his feet show it, Longfellows :D
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