someone review my article
i'm writing an article for the school news paper about my robotics team and i need opinions. tell me what you think. is it good? does it suck? do i need to change it? is it really boring? i dunno. i need reviews. the idea is to get the team known all over school and i want this to be effective. oh! and title suggestions would be good too. thanks a lot.
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2002 - Team 692, Robot Driver/Historian
2003 - Team 692, President/Pit Leader/Lead Mechanic/Robot Driver
2004 - Sitting on the Sidelines...
2005 - Sac Robot Inspector
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[as much as you may not believe it, Real Life can get in the way of FIRST]
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2009 - Team 692, Alumni Mentor/Drive Team Coach
Cal Poly, BS Mechanical Engineering, 2008
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