Darn, I wish I had written that myself. Very nice.  There were a couple things I noticed.
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About 300 different teams meet in one location to meet and have fun.
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I'm not sure where you got the 300 number, usually a regional has about 50. There are over 800 teams nationwide. Also, you repeat the word "meet."
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One the SF Robotics side, we’re hoping to have a lot of things accomplished for this next year.
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I think the first word of this sentence is supposed to be "On."
Nice job, keep up the good work. 
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Mentor/Engineer/Machinist, Team 968 RAWC, 2007-2010
Technical Mentor, Team 696 Circuit Breakers, 2005-2007
Student Mechanical Leader and Driver, Team 696 Circuit Breakers, 2002-2004
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