There's a few things I would have you consider:
You might consider making this a word document instead of an excel. It will take up more space, but you can organize it rather effectively.
With that in mind:
-Strategy for Auto, tele-op, and end game. It's really useful to know what their plan of attack is in these games.
-Claw is a little vague, might change that to "end effector" or some such. Add a little room for a response, as there might be some interesting things to mention, and you never know what teams may come up with.
-Consider adding drive train as a section. This can be useful as well for making some strategic choices.
-You can probably leave uber-tube to match scouting, as you will more reliably find out from what happens rather then what they tell you.
This is the scouting sheet I made up for the FTC game, as an example of how we organize ours a bit. You don't need too much, but providing enough space for each response can be useful if they have any interesting ideas. The rest, you can usually leave to match scouting.
As a side note, the jargon is called pit scouting
Good luck!