[davidthefat]

Personally, in the brochure, I would replace "3d design" with "systems design" or something along that line. Also, I would take out the "future" in the "we become" statement. Instead of "We use education", I would write: "We apply the knowledge we gain in school to real life situations". Ans "We are future leaders" to "We are the leaders of the future"

"We design and build a robot in six weeks from a common set of parts." to "We are given 6 weeks to design and build a competitive robot".

"We strategize for a game that allows us to gain the most points while hindering opponents." to: "We develop strategies that allow us to triumph over our opponents."

"We learn to problem solve, build strategic skills, and increase analytical thinking in a team building environment." to "We learn to solve problems, build tactical skills, and induce critical thinking in a team building environment."

"We learn gracious professionalism in both work and competition." to: "We learn to pursue gracious professionalism in every aspect of our lives."



In the poster:

"95% believe company’s involvement with FIRST benefits firm's reputation."

"77% indicate their firm’s support for FIRST made them affirmative about their employees."

"66% believe support for FIRST would help attract and retain good employees."