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Re: Critique of a Poster and Brochure
First off, love the format of everything. Others have hit every grammar correction I found and more. The first thing I would change is try adding a border/shadow to the puzzle pieces to make it more clear that it is 2 puzzle pieces. It took me a minute to figure out what the 1 oblong shape was. Once I realized it was 2, everything made more sense. The only other thing I could think of is the statistics. Who was surveyed? Currently it reads, "95% believe company’s involvement with FIRST benefits firm's reputation." I immediately thought, 95% of who? Is it 95% of your sponsors? of the students on your team? of the general public? If your going to present numbers, be sure they answer more questions then they bring up. Other then those two things, I like everything about the poster and brochure. If you need a critique for future things, feel free to post them here.
Jason
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