[Andrew Schreiber]

Sorry to pick on you but I can't tell what this is supposed to be. This is due to a couple of factors. Foremost amongst these is the fact that you have large sections of your render in a dark color and it is on a black background. Maybe I'm just old but I really can't see much detail. Perhaps you should make another render that is a little more focused on the model and uses a better background color (might I suggest a light grey?) You could also post some of your reasons for designing it this way as well as weight, speed, etc.