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Re: Can you Review 3337s Sponsorship Packet?
That looks fantastic, our team should really consider doing something similar! A few minor criticisms:
Put 'What is FRC' above 'Expenses', maybe even around 'mission statement'. It seems like Expenses is summing it up, kind of like an appendix
In 'Mission Statement', in the second paragraph you switch perspectives form 'students' to 'we'. I would say stick with students, since it sounds more professional.
Overall, design wise, it looks great. The whole thing made me want to give you money, even though I am certainly not any sort of business. Great job.
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