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Originally Posted by bearbot
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Here are some of my flyby thoughts..
Your front page is fairly clean. I would advise two thing: make your header (with team number and name) bigger and add perhaps a paragraph explaining who you are and/or what is first. I like your header design but it doesnt catch the users eye enough and you could probably fix that by making it just a tad bit bigger. Also initial viewers might be interested in a quick overview of who you are, so its often a good idea to put introductory information on the front page.
You have a very detailed student and mentor section, so kudos because that is definitely extra work. I did find it a little confusing that you put the 'alumni' section under the mentor area. If you were going to list all of your alumni I would make it a separate section, equal to mentors and students. If you are only listing alumni-turned-mentors then I would group them in with the mentor page, although maybe under a special heading, similar to the way you have "Mentors Emeritus".
Its a little unclear why you have a regular Calendar and a parents Calendar, especially because the regular is powered by Google and the Parents one is not. Unless you have an overriding reason, I would probably combine them and use the Google Calendar (its easy and neat).
I would probably add more the FIRST section. Not only does it give viewers a better understanding of the program but website judges also like to see some original content about FIRST written by the team.
The amount of content on each year for the Team History section seems to be different each time. If you can, I would standardize how much on each one just for consistency's sake. It might also be helpful to break down your information by type and then by year. I know many teams have a page for each game and then on that page the game information is sorted by year. And then they have a page for awards and the awards are sorted by year. Often that is a little easier to navigate. Also it seems a little odd that for Team History you have a tab for each year and then sponsors is put in there. I would probably make sponsors a separate section. It doesn't quite fit into team history. The sponsor page does seem nice and standard.
The information about your outreach project seems fairly comprehensive. The 'Summer 2012" Page is a bit of a mystery to me. Is it a schedule? You might want to clarify more / neaten the page up. Or perhaps incorporate it into the Calendar? Nice resources section, there seems to be a good bit of information there.