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Originally Posted by rachelholladay
Some of my thoughts -
You have all the right important content on the front page and a very solid header. I do agree with an above statement about how there is more blue than orange. While I like the anchoring effect the background has on the look of the page I think the fact that it is a blue wave forming detracts and distracts from your teams theme (unless, of course, your theme relates to waves). The page currents gives the impression that blue is the dominant color and orange is the accent color. The introductory paragraph is well done in the fact that it gives the quick facts about your team. You have a little section on FIRST (mainly just the logo and a link) but you may want to consider expanding it somewhat or tailoring so it matches the intro section about your team (and thus giving continuity). I do like the premium real estate you give to your sponsors and I'm sure they appreciate that as well. You video and slideshow on the front page are also both nice touches. I'm on a laptop right now and cannot comment on the touch screen-y-ness but with a resolution of 1366 x 768 the whole site looks good.
You grouped everything in the navbar into basically two categories and while the submenus are long the overall navbar is clean and neat. I would suggest that on the home page keeping the "Welcome" tab a link. Even if it links to itself or the link is simply <a href="#"></a> the link would give consistency. But this is a minor point.
On many of the other subpages the large orange text box gives a much more orange feel and using the same style of text unifies the site. Your about section is very much to the point, which can be effective. You display for sponsors well, although you might consider giving more information about each one (this is required although it seems to be a very popular practice among FIRST teams). I liked the amount of detail provided for the robots, most particularly the 2012 one (which has much more than the other two combined). For the award section, showing the award with an orange backdrop is a nice touch that brings in your team theme. Am I correct in viewing that there is only one video in the video section? I would consider adding more. Using Photobucket seems to be a fairly effective way to display your media and the headshots of the students and mentors are a nice personalization touch.
I too enjoy Google insets and liked the Calendar (which many if not most use) and particularly your team finder page. The team finder is something most don't have but is a really neat tool and not all that difficult with the Google Maps API (although judging by your source code, which I peaked at, you inserted a specialty map which was probably even easier than generating a map with markers.) Your resources section is off to a good start and I'm sure many more helpful videos or documents are coming.
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Thanks very much for your feedback! This was my first venture into Dreamweaver, so I am still learning. I will take your critique into consideration.
Btw, there are many more videos coming.