[Kims Robot]

Feedback...

• Great catchy starting picture & I like the brain teaser. I wouldn't have them guess at the end, just give them a minute to think about it and see if anyone can guess.
• Slide 3 - An important point I always use is that Dean really wanted students to look up to real world engineers the same way they would look up to a basketball player or a singer or an actress
• Slide 4 - you say "you are sent a standard kit of parts... look into the guidelines", sorry I don't know your background, but are you actually uncertain here? It probably suffices to say "like real engineering, we are given rules and restrictions, and the kit of parts as a place to start, but unlike building with legos or erector sets, we can make all sorts of custom components" or something like that.
• Good use of the videos
• Not exactly sure what you are trying to show on slide 8. Its quite an eye chart, I think I'd give a handout, and put something on the slide that has more detail (but fewer rows). Also I think the formatting is a bit off... the third bullet point should probably be on one side. I would also put Weaknesses last in the list, and possibly call it "future development"? or something... its not really to get all PC on it, its because you don't want to scare them away... and I think I'd name it something like "Understanding Each Student". I don't know that in a rookie team you'd really have a great basis for evaluating students, so honestly I might even leave the "evaluation" part out for now. Putting a good structure together and Organizing your groups is important, but you may not want to hit them over the head with the "how" just yet. You can certainly hand out an application or evaluation form to ask them to fill out, but I wouldn't put it in your initial presentation. Slide 9 does a bit of a better job at giving them a high level view of the organization.
• Slide 10 - if this is an "intro" slide set, I would cut this. If this is for a team that is starting this year, it may be more relevant... but its also a bit overkill in the slide. There should never be text and rows on a slide that isn't readable on a normal 8.5x11 sheet of paper. While it looks like a great excel sheet, its boring to the "potential new member". See if you can find a way to talk about it in bullets/notes without the actual sheet on the slide.
• Next set of slides are great - good topics & good pictures
• Slide 25 - I'd shy away from pointing anyone brand new to Chief delphi. It can be incredibly overwhelming. Its a wonderful resource for someone who has done it/knows a bit about it, but there are a lot of people that are a bit quick to say RTFM.

Great presentation overall - I think you did a lot to capture the energy and the organization of it all.

You can check out some of the resources I put together starting 1511, as well as some that 1511 has added over the years.
http://penfieldrobotics.com/resources/rookies.php

Good luck!