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Unread 09-05-2013, 10:10
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Re: Feedback needed
Overall it looks great. One thing that I noticed is that the Oxford comma should be before "and".

Quote:
We sponsor many Jr. FLL, FLL and, FRC Teams.
Should be "We sponsor many Jr. FLL, FLL, and FRC Teams.

Also the formatting of the links on the resources page seems a bit odd. Not that bad though.
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