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Unread 06-02-2003, 22:27
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Originally posted by TheSwazz
This is our animation after two hours of intense work. Give us some feedback.
Note: The stuff I circled I though could use some more materialing work

Hmmm....It seems that your walls are tiled and it could use some work. I would use photoshop to blur the edges somewhat or use a different material instead of a bitmap type thing, which is what it looks like. Same thing for the floor. I would add some more details as well, such as other stuff you might find in a room, like a lightswitch. It really does look good, but I think that this camera angle and perhaps the lighting does not do it justice, maybe add ,more lights at less intensity. Try not to get as much open space where you dont have any models when you do your final renders. Also, it seems that the materialing on the second cupboard(the one with the door open) seems to be less realistic than the other one. Other than this, I think it looks good. What kind of a room are you going for, if you dont mind me asking?
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