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Re: Chairman's Award Question
Also, please don't use "they" when referring to your own team (you wrote your essay, not an impartial observer).
As for "Team XXXX" versus (or in addition to) "we," I think it's fine to use them interchangeably-- do try to throw some variety in there. Like Mech said, "We..." or "Team XXXX..." gets really old really fast. You don't want to irritate the people reading your Chairman's Essay.
If all else fails, just try reading it aloud. If it sounds weird, change it.
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