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Originally posted by MBiddy
Do you want feedback on the site itself or the poetry? The actual site is fine I guess. Very black.
In Nothing Will Matter, Mr. Game, I Like You and War Time Novelty, taking lines directly from Metallica songs is not cool. Be inspired by them or use one line as a base, but write a poem with your own words instead of stealing lines. At least give credit or something. Funny that you have that copyright message at the bottom.
As for poetry in general, you might want to try writing more poems that don't rhyme, or try to have longer lines. There are some really simple short rhymes in there and a LOT of lines that sound like you just put filler in so it would rhyme. Ouch.
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Taking certain lines is not copyright infragment. Taking the whole song lyrics, or whatever and claiming them as your own without giving credit is. I didn't do that. Taking song titles is not copyright infragment. Taking titles is sort of a compliment. Short rhymes, long rhymes, it all depends on how and/or what the writter feels approperiate. I don't bloat the lines, because that ain't how I write. There should be no credit given right now because I haven't broken any laws or anything dealing with the saying "give credit where credit is due."
Thank you for your response, but I appreciate it better when people don't accuse me of breaking the law.
(I like using black for websites)