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IMO raven: if you are unwilling to take criticism of any sort, you should not ask for comments.
Further, I do think it is plagerism. Not just because your words are similar, but the order of presentation is waaay to similar. It isn't breaking the law if you have similar lines every so often, but when its every other line... :-/
Further, I really dislike the method of presentation. I suggest giving each poem its own page...
It is very black. Not just sort of black, but overly black, I sould suggest inserting more color variation. And not just your "listening to" ticker. Use BlogAmp if you want a text display...
Also, the navigation menu is very sparse, so I think its kind of weird that it takes up so much space for so little...
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