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Originally posted by HFWang
IMO raven: if you are unwilling to take criticism of any sort, you should not ask for comments.
Further, I do think it is plagerism. Not just because your words are similar, but the order of presentation is waaay to similar. It isn't breaking the law if you have similar lines every so often, but when its every other line... :-/
Further, I really dislike the method of presentation. I suggest giving each poem its own page...
It is very black. Not just sort of black, but overly black, I sould suggest inserting more color variation. And not just your "listening to" ticker. Use BlogAmp if you want a text display...
Also, the navigation menu is very sparse, so I think its kind of weird that it takes up so much space for so little...
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I apologize for my actions, and me and MBiddy talked about the issue, and I will re-write my poems. I don't really want to give it it's own page, because I'm on Brinkster w/ 30 megs of space (which can be used up fast), but I'll proably do what you said. I know it's a little to black, but I like working with black. I'll brighten up the colors and such. This one girl gave me an idea in school a while ago for it. The navigation is sparse because I didn't have much time to work on the layout. I'm currently thinking of a new design now. Thank you for your input.
Again, I apologize for my actions, comments, and reactions to the above posts made by anyone. I know it was wrong, I won't do it again.