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Re: FRC 2869's First Chairmans Video
Nicely done! Some constructive feedback...
-The music is way louder than the people talking. I had to lean into my computer to hear them.
-A lot of the video doesn't deal with Chairman's stuff (some of it almost felt more like a robot reveal). It's not a problem per se, but you could use that time to describe your outreach.
-Some of the shots (especially at the start) are pretty shaky.
-Most of your outreach is described via voice-over, without any visuals. (Could be because no one remembered to take any pictures - no worries, just do it next year!)
You're off to a great start, and the production quality on your video is fantastic (especially for a first-year submitter). Congrats on submitting, and best of luck this year!
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Yale University Class of 2020
Team 1540 | 2012-2016
7 Chairman's Awards, 6 other awards, 2015 Dean's List Finalist, 1 event win, 2 finalist finishes. Thanks for an amazing ride.
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