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Originally posted by GilaHumanPlayer
2. No music?
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True, music could have made it a LOT better... It's still really good though. I admire the detail work on the parts.
It would have been
awesome to see some heat waves behind the jet, which can be easily accomplished with a particle emitter used as a map. Also, the plane looks like it was modeled quickly. Instead of using planes as the door, simply adding some depth and maybe some hinges and pneumatic door control (or whatever they use) would make the modeling aspect almost perfectt. Some more dirt on the plane and the parts shown would have been nice, such as the built up grease seen on moving parts... I'm just being a perfectionist though. We're still staying after school 3 days a week to perfect ours for show purposes.