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Re: paper: FIRST Team 3337: Chairman's Award Essay
I wanted to add a bit to the post overall due to the fact that there are always new teams working on Chairman's Award.
Our general essay writing process is a bit interesting. Usually, our awards team meets together to make a very rough outline of what is being written. Only one person actually writes the initial first draft using the previous year's essay as a guide. Once done, the whole team rips it apart using knives and spoons. It is then re-written using those suggestions and ripped apart again.
Once this is done, its given to even harsher critics - our teachers - who rip it apart. We then edit it using each teacher's edits to help further refine how well it flows. Unfortunately, this does not catch every single error - but it helps.
Finally - we read the essay out loud - sometimes backwards. If it still sounds coherent, we are ready to submit.
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Coach. D. Eiland
Head Coach - Team #3337
Panthrobotics (Woodlawn HS)
2016: Bayou Regional WFFA Winner
2016: Rocket City Regional Judges Award
2015: Bayou Spirit Award, Bayou Chairman's Award, Bayou Dean's List Finalist (Danielle Massey), Bayou Volunteer of the Year Award
2014: Bayou Dean's List Finalist (Witni Widmeier)
2011: Bayou Regional Winner | Judges Award
2010: Rookie Inspiration Award
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