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Re: pic: Districts in Minnesota Flyer
Folks,
Set aside your pitchforks for a moment.
I did a slower read of the flyer looking for things my English teachers would have corrected (I lost a letter grade each time Ms Austin used her red pen). I didn't take notes, so this post isn't details. Instead it's just a word to the wise.
IMO there is at least one grammar mistake, and a borderline sentence/phrase or two.
The mistake I remember is that "Qualification ... are ...", should change to "Qualification ... is ...".
I'll repeat that a quick once over by someone with serious editing chops wouldn't hurt. They can help make it better.
Blake
PS: transitioning 
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Words/phrases  I avoid: basis, mitigate, leveraging, transitioning, impact (instead of affect/effect), facilitate, programmatic, problematic, issue (instead of problem), latency (instead of delay), dependency (instead of prerequisite), connectivity, usage & utilize (instead of use), downed, functionality, functional, power on, descore, alumni (instead of alumnus/alumna), the enterprise, methodology, nomenclature, form factor (instead of size or shape), competency, modality, provided(with), provision(ing), irregardless/irrespective, signage, colorized, pulsating, ideate
Last edited by gblake : 12-04-2016 at 10:42.
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