1. I don't know what "synergistic" means and chances are many other readers don't either (or maybe I'm just dumb  )
2. I would change the last two words to be "FIRST enthusiasts." "All people" sounds sort of hippie-like.
Otherwise, very nice job. 
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Teacher/Engineer/Machinist - Team 696 Circuit Breakers, 2011 - Present
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