Quote:
Originally posted by M. Krass
...here are my concerns about using language like, "needed," ...
What if it's not? While I firmly believe that this can be an amazingly useful resource to many teams, I've been wrong before. I'm hesitant to say this is "needed" because it's a bit more pompous and arrogant than we can afford to be at this juncture, or, so I think. Though, maybe "unique" isn't the best word, either.
|
What if the first sentence were changed to be:
By providing resources, services, and opportunities
to be utilized by teams participating in the FIRST Robotics Competition, FreelanceFIRST seeks to engage in a synergistic effort to promote the goals of the FIRST Robotics Competition and to enrich the FIRST community.
indieFan