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Unread 12-07-2003, 05:42
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this is a very nice looking thing, i dont have any grammer or content suggestions but some "look" suggestions

the photos you have on the front page, make a "color" overlay for them in perhaps that dark teal color you use for the logo on top of the same page, perhaps use different shades of that color

if you are using photoshop, just open up those pictures, select some brush, select the dark teal color, then brush blend type select "color", then color the images (this is an example of what i mean: http://users.wpi.edu/~piotrm/first/example_001.jpg )

as for all the other photos on this thing, i would make them slightly ligher (turn up brightness slightly) and perhaps make the side bar you have running down those pages gray instead of very dark blackish color it is now

also, i would color in the pie chart you have on the last page; and instead of trying to fit in that very tiny text into the small sectors, i would put the text outside and make it slightly bigger, can use color coding or arrow to correlate to the sector and i would also color code the descriptions of the costs for the pie chart you have to its right

these are just my opinions, the whole thing looks very well as it is, but if i were you i would have done what i just written

good luck

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