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Unread 06-08-2003, 19:41
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Originally posted by DarkRedDragon
I have written and enjoyed all of lititure since i could read and write. Ever hear of the book "cryptonomicron"? its a 1,500 page book, really good i would suggest it! Anyway, here is a sample of some of the stuff i have written:

Love from the Sea
A snow of petals is all that can be seen, a sweet aura of roses hang in the air.
Walking through the forest, a breeze tickles my face.
The trees begin to thin; a setting sun can be seen over the horizon.
Slowly disappearing beneath the waves of the sea.
The gentle sound of waves lapping the shore is all that is to be heard.
So soothing, so calming, so peaceful they are.
The sun has dropped beneath the sea, swallowing it without a trace.
From behind a light shines, the light of the moon upon the land.
Everything bathed in a snowy white light.
A sound rises over the crash of the gentle waves, a sound of steps.
Looking to the sea, a figure moves, shadowed by the moon.
Walking closer, she holds a rose, a rose as white as snow.
Her lips move, no sound is heard, but I know what She said.
“I love you my rose.”
As she whispers these words, the wind roars, snowy petals are thrown between us.
It passes quickly, but she is gone.
Who was she?
That poem is really good. Has it been published?
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