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Unread 22-09-2003, 03:55
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Wow Shyra, you did a pretty decent job here. Some quick suggestions on my initial scanning would be to take out the drawbacks section because when you are selling something, it's not good to focus on the negative... and for the budget, I think it may be a little high.
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