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Originally posted by WakeZero
Wow Shyra, you did a pretty decent job here. Some quick suggestions on my initial scanning would be to take out the drawbacks section because when you are selling something, it's not good to focus on the negative... and for the budget, I think it may be a little high.
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thank you. unfortunately, i have to keep the drawbacks section in as my teachers have asked for it. as for the budget, i copied that from the usfirst site. what would you suggest as a more appropiate budget?