[Raven_Writer]

Originally Posted by Meli W.

Just read it slowly. And remember that it is a framed story. Marlow is telling the narrator about his journeys through the river so it is not in order. You get flashbacks within flashbacks. Maybe you should write down each of the locations Marlow is at...like first hte Nellie and then you can see how hsi journey really works.

Hm...ok, I'll do that and see how that works out for me.

Thanks Meli and breezy also