[AcePilot]

I have written a letter and haven't sent it yet, i want to know what you guys think, what should be added or subtracted, or if i should just go in a completely new direction with it.

Here it is;

To whom it may concern,

My name is Joshua Lingerfelt and I am part of Team 1447-Mopar and Center Line High School. Last year we decided to take part in First Robotics, and registered our team. This is now our second year, and we got off to an undesired start. We built what was, in my opinion, a First Class Robot, with nothing more than a single sponsor, three engineers, and dedicated students and mentors. With our limited funds we were only able to take part in a single competition. I believe that this group of individuals deserve to take part in more that a single competition, simply because of their hard work and dedication, always keeping in mind the Fundamentals of First. We recently came into more funds, thanks to some more than generous companies. So even though our robot has been shipped back to our school, would it be possible in any way to take part in just one more competition?

I appreciate your organization in taking time to read my letter, and our team is greatly anticipating a response.

Sincerely,

Joshua Lingerfelt
Team 1447-Mopar and Center Line High School