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Originally Posted by gwross
This is an egregious example of a comma spliced sentence. Please rewrite.... And thank you for caring.  (Or were you simply wondering whether the update were written using proper English?  ) |
I think the wording on the update was great.
Thanks, Since it is my senior year and we do next to nothing in my English class I seem to be getting dumber. And i caught a nasty case of seniorities (sp?) and have become lazy. Thank you for the helpful link though.