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Re: Critique

Hello,

Great job of your website --- it looks extremely organized. However, I do have some advice. Instead of listing the items that could be improved-- I quickly made the edits to your original image, but did not include some of the original text. Since I created them very fast, they are lacking final touches - not perfect. Here they are:

1. http://img2.uploadimages.net/299360site31mu2.gif
2. http://img2.uploadimages.net/260872site31mu3.jpg

I hope this helps! Good Luck!

-Corey
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