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Re: English Essay: FIRST Style!
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Originally Posted by Tom Bottiglieri
I think I found an error. Oops.
Yeah.. I was wondering about that, but some of us did find seats in the Astrodome just to take in a relaxed view of the pits.

The rest of the mob went to Reliant, and found seats in their divisions which was kinda hard cause on Thursday the signs were not above the fields yet which was kind of annoying.

Same deal in 2004 in Atlanta.. real annoying.


Oh, and great job by the way.. Love the opening statement. I always have trouble with that.
I always get red lined version back saying "make a stronger opening".
Looks like you mastered that.
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