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Re: 1620's Website - Critiquing Needed
Alright, I'll bite (I'm kind of tired and it's 1:30 in the morning, though, as I start this). I hope you take these comments to be constructive suggestions (I realise that doing web stuff takes a lot of time and that you've probably put a lot of effort into things so far and that some of these things are pretty minor).
I find the main text to be difficult to read on the background it's on; something a bit less active/bright as a background would help.
Competition is misspelled as "Competetion" on the About Us page
There's more sponsors/mentoring organisations mentioned on the About Us page than there are listed on the Our Sponsors page (I'm guessing an image for one of them is forthcoming or something).
The photos look nice (I like the one of the guy wrapped up in caution tape)
The way the table of links is layed out seems a bit confusing.
By all means post here again once you've updated things and I'll take another look (most likely at a more reasonable hour).
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Alumni of FRC Team 1006
Former mentor of Full Lego Alchemist (FLL 5621) - Sempar School / Computing Students' Association of Queen's University
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