[Capt.ArD]

nice. middle pic doesn't work. very low-poly for a First animation, compared to what i've seen. Our scenes are sometimes up to 500,000 polys. After seeing that and taking another look at your character renders, i would suggest you add a few more polys to the characters. look esp. at their armpits: there are a few blank spots where i guess your ink'n paint had problems. a few more polys might help smooth that out.

very good job, altogether. how fast is the render for your scene?