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Re: Team 1468 - The J-Birds Website

The text on the "about" page seems familiar...I'm not sure if that should be quoted from somewhere or if it's supposed to be for purposes such as teams' websites.

Also, the text is kind of thick (for a lack of a better way to describe it). I guess it's that the text is kind of crowded and hard to read. Maybe the line spacing could be increased a little bit, and also a little more space before and after paragraphs.

Aside from that,

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Originally Posted by Fruity Pebbles
That's looking GREAT!! The one thing that I suggest at the current moment is the thing that says "your IP is " or something along that line should be removed.
Agreed. Very good start.
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