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Unread 22-02-2006, 23:03
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Rookie Year: 2006
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Re: Team 1029...check it out

I do like the general layout of your website, only there is too much going on at once. Keep the image marquee, except remove the border from the images with the border="0" in img HTML tag. The images are a bit too large and distract from the true written content of your team's website; try scaling them down to a smaller, yet still visible, but true thumbnail size values. Also perhaps news should have it's on page, as having it on the navigation frame clutters it; so try having a page dedicated to team news. Also, because of the clutter, it makes your main content frame much smaller then it needs to be. Try increasing your font size slightly

For your writing style, you really should use proper spelling and grammar. Avoid using short land and metaphores ("You'll just have to wait and see, it's a beast thou")

In your HTML watch your cases. "No" is not the same as "no"; HTML looks for lowercase. Try to conform your website to www.W3.org standards, as more users will be able to see the website at it's full potential. Here is a direct link to the W3 page-scan of your your web page. At this time you have 9 minor errors that shouldn't take that long to fix.

Hey, if you need any help with anything, feel free to let me know

Jonathan
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