09-05-2006, 19:50
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I haven't any bullets
AKA: NPC / Mercury Rising
 FRC #0025 (Raider Robotix) Team Role: Driver
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Rookie Year: 2006
Location: North Brunswick, New Jersey
Posts: 505
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Re: Fun little WIP, please critique
I feel for the most part the modeling is good. Yet if you were going for the feeling of a real Assembly line you missed it. This seems more as a story of 6 or 7 toys. Also like buddy said give it some lighting. By the right lighting you can illuminated mostly the line and cut out the need for most background items. (If that is what your looking for)
Two final things
Injection molds have a cone shaped hole in the top
at least all the ones I have seen do
You can add sound in video post? We had to add ours in curve editor, then again we didn't look beyond the basics of video post..
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