[Lil' Lavery]

Incorporating the video to the music always helps, but it isn't recquired, and can often be difficult.
One spelling correction though, Cooperation was spelled Coorperation (or maybe you mean Corporation, either way).
Also, cool effect of having the voiceover come over the music, but it you had the music a little bit louder during that part I think it would have been better, and you would have still been able to hear the announcer. Some more announcer clips would be really cool as well.
Also, consider your target audience. If this is targeted at your team (as a highlight reel), team parents, other FIRSTers, or even judges, the defensive clips and such are perfect. But if it is targeted at potential sponsors, or even potential members, you may want to include some "best of the best" footage and suggested earlier.