[Lil' Lavery]

This seems like a video aimed at people not familiar with the FIRST program, so you may want to include some explanations of what each award is. Also, who won the WFFA? And you may want to spruce up the beginning in general.
The transitions from explanation screens to the footage were rather sudden and harsh, you may want to use a fade or other form of transition to help that as well.
You also used some of the same footage twice (and some times almost right after it was used before). I know you may not have that much footage to draw from, but using it twice (especially with the commentary audible during both clips) seems kinda tacky. Removing the commentary from one (or both) of the "double clips" might help create the illusion that it isn't the same clip. Also, you may want to mix up a bit of the scoring footage into the earlier sections as well, the earlier clips were definately alot less exciting than the later ones.
Finally, it ends quite abruptly. There are alot of option on how to end it, but the way it is now is far from the best.
Great start thouh.