[Robert Thacker-]

Honestly, I think that it's a pretty good picture. It is a nice job for your first year. Be sure to put on the link for your website, I would like to see it.

However, I think that the lighting could be a bit different, maybe even a different view (if that is your final overall pic). I believe it looks a little like some of your manufactured pieces look like you displayed them
"As Material" and they might look better if you had a rendered image of perhaps "steel (pollished)".

The background I like, if those are your team colors (if not, I would just do something that is more simple).

I am excited to see the final product on your site. Good Work!