I just remembered that people wanted me to tell them how the rewriting of my essay went.
Well, I've completed it after a week and a few days, the amount of pages were the same as the last version, except that in the last version I was missing one subject in the essay which I haven't finished it. In the new one I finished it and it was about 9 pages for the single subject.
All in all, I feel that the new version is much mroe advanced and professinal, in the terms that I was able to express myself better and correctly. I'm proud of my 34 page essay about my review of the FIRST project last season!
I'd upload the file, but it's in hebrew, sorry.
Thanks for the encourgment all! Doubt I would've done it again without you.
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TEAM 2230 ZECHARIA'S ANGELS
2009 Microsoft Israel FRC Regional Winners!
2009 Microsoft Israel FRC Regional Chairman's Award Winners!!!
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2008 Microsoft Israel FRC Regional semi-finalist.
2008 Microsoft Israel FRC Regional Delphi's "Driving Tommorow's Technology" Award winner.
2008 Robot Driver
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2007 GM/Technion Israel FRC Regional semi-Finalist.
2007 GM/Technion Israel FRC Regional Xerox Creativity Award winner.
2007 Robot Driver.