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Re: Team 270 Website--Just Up

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Originally Posted by Blad3101 View Post
Love the website, but beware that FIRST will not like your implementation of their pixelated logo. You might want to try resizing that image, or possibly downloading a new logo from FIRST.
You can grab a logo in all kinds of sizes here:
http://www.usfirst.org/community/res...er.aspx?id=650

Also, you might want to ask the school district for a larger logo too.
That being said, I'm viewing in Firefox and your headline text and subtext seems abnormally large. It doesn't fit well with the rest of your clean, tight, small page. Also, I'd suggest centering your page. There's something to be said for left-aligned pages, but only if they're really large. This layout would look much cleaner centered (and you'd even out your whitespace).

The photos and links pages scare me, but I'm guessing that's just because you haven't edited them yet? I'm concerned about them because they don't match the fluidity of the rest of your site.

The Team Story page has great content, but consider rearranging it so it flows better. Think about the audience you're trying to reach (specifically the website judges), and consider what order they want to read in. Me personally, I'd like to see the "Adding Fun" section first, but renamed to something like "Team History" followed by the 05 & thank you section, and then finally the current section.

Likewise, think about the order of your rules page, and consider changing the header names. To me, when I think about rules, they're the rules of a website, so I might even consider changing that link to say something like "2008 Game." Also, there's a handy link on that page, but it's not clickable!

The FIRST page looks nice, but the topmost section on the left has some formatting errors. Also, you might want to consider simplifying your content, or making the layout a bit easier to follow.

Lastly, remember images are meant to accentuate your content, not be big, bulky, information. Consider resizing images to thumbnails (clickable to view full-size if viewers want), or just shrinking them to maintain some quality.

I know this seems like a lot of work, but you can do it!

If you need some more examples, take a look at my team's website:
http://www.mercury1089.com We're currently in the process of updating our content for this season, but it should have some content that will help you out.

Also, take a look at Section 5: The Awards in the manual, and do a self-test using the scoring sheet they provide. To be honest, I'm not sure if it's in this year's manual, but I guarantee it's in an old one somewhere.

Good luck!
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