I really liked the beginning, great job! I agree that towards the end it slowed down a bit. My team and I are working on building a website that will both promote FIRST to other schools and also serve as a community for those already involved in FIRST. The site is
http://www.firstobjective.org. Check it out and add your video if you'd like.
I recently made
this FIRST promo video using Sony Vegas (trial version) and really liked it. The trial version is fully functional for a month (I think), it's worth downloading and giving it a try.
Roger
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Roger Smith
Mentor - FRC Team 3357
COMETS - Creating Outstanding Minds, Embracing Technology & Science
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