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Re: Rookie Introduction Presentation
1. Well Lynca, I notice on page 1, that you have Intro to FIRST for Rookies. Although rookies is ok, i find that word can sometimes be harsh, might i suggest "new members" or something.
2.On page 3, you have 2 quotes and the first quote has no author after it, only the second one does.
3. This isn't a problem, but Kickoff is January 3rd this year. People will remember it better if you give a specific date.
Rest looks good. Nice job in laying out the organization of your team.
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