Thanks for the suggestions over PMs and in this thread.
I've rolled out Version 2 of the presentation.
http://docs.google.com/Presentation?...29p_80xjb3bzxb
We made this presentation to many new teams at the Texas FIRST workshop this past weekend. Here are some pictures of many different teams helping out at the workshop.
http://lamar.discobots.org/node/32 (you have to click on FRC workshop)