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Unread 22-11-2010, 20:24
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Re: Team 134's Website

I really like your site: the color scheme is nice and easy enough to read, the layout is intuitive, and it has quite a bit of information. A few suggestions came to mind as I browsed through it:

Play with the margins and paddings on the front page a bit. Especially the sidebars don't have enough padding around the text.

There needs to be an apostrophe in "This Year's Game," for instance. In general, don't use a colon following a preposition. (E.g. "Updated by Jeff Roche," not "Updated by: Jeff Roche" - see http://www.grammarphobia.com/blog/20...treatment.html)

A FIRST logo with a transparent background would look better on your front page.

The banner image is kind of pixellated.

"Click Here" can be a kind of unprofessional way to write links. I find it more pleasing when they are worked into the text.

From the front page, it is not obvious what your team is or what its mission is if a viewer has not already heard of FIRST Robotics. I would put some introduction text or a link to it on the front page. More prose in general would be good.
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