Team 1468 - The J-Birds Website

[Spindash54]

http://www.team1468.com

Still in its infant stages, but we'll be adding more stuff in a few days like pictures and video.

Any comments or suggestions at the moment?

[Michelle Celio]

That's looking GREAT!! The one thing that I suggest at the current moment is the thing that says "your IP is " or something along that line should be removed.

[Dan Zollman]

The text on the "about" page seems familiar...I'm not sure if that should be quoted from somewhere or if it's supposed to be for purposes such as teams' websites.

Also, the text is kind of thick (for a lack of a better way to describe it). I guess it's that the text is kind of crowded and hard to read. Maybe the line spacing could be increased a little bit, and also a little more space before and after paragraphs.

Aside from that,

Originally Posted by Fruity Pebbles

That's looking GREAT!! The one thing that I suggest at the current moment is the thing that says "your IP is " or something along that line should be removed.

Agreed. Very good start.

[Michelle Celio]

Originally Posted by worldbringer

The text on the "about" page seems familiar...I'm not sure if that should be quoted from somewhere or if it's supposed to be for purposes such as teams' websites.

Also, the text is kind of thick (for a lack of a better way to describe it). I guess it's that the text is kind of crowded and hard to read. Maybe the line spacing could be increased a little bit, and also a little more space before and after paragraphs.

Aside from that,



Agreed. Very good start.

I dont see what your talking about with the font *in fire fox* I can kinda see it in IE (i belive it's probably bolded or too large of a font size)

and as for the IP its picking up the IP of my router which is kinda pointless.... thank god for 192.168.x.x!!! =]