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Re: paper: Woodlawn High School's Robotics Academy Grant
Very good paper. I like how you provide a picture of the current situation and how the program can help improve the situation. A couple suggestions :
- Have a long term goal in which can be measurable. A example would be that by 2016, 30% of the students that scores bellow on the GEE test will be enrolled on the program. Or that the overall score of the school will improve by %.
- Have an estimate of the total cost of the program. Including re-ocurring cost such as food at "graduation ceremony"....
Overall great, solid paper. I am currently working with BAEO St. Louis to implement a robotics program here in Missouri, if successful hopefully we will see it in your area, and maybe we can one day have a telecom for us all to get together and share our experiences.
Cheers,
Marcos.
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